Main Character Fighting Styles
On the subject of throwing weapons, most of them can't be used in melee combat and if you have to go and pick up the weapon you give your opponent a large opening. If all you have to do is pull it out of you well I think enough said.
Posted 25 Jan 09 in Forum for Adventurers
Phase Two - Writing for Adventurers
It seems like one thing we all have to remember here is that we are filling out an application for a 15 year old and not an adult. A person can only learn so much in that time and with a still developing body much training in things like combat and such need constant adjustment to follow ones growth.
Posted 06 Jan 09 in Forum for Adventurers
I think that Dove has a lot hidden about her past, like the lack of a last name (see the scene for the finals and the groupings). Also a few things about her past that are hinted to in the book that aren't in the online version. Once some of these past events come out into the open, along with more of Fell's past, like parent's and such. I mean why did he get stuck with be bonded to the haybailer. Anyway Dove and Fell could make a good couple.
Posted 06 Jan 09 in Forum for Adventurers
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